Community Writing Workshop: Introduction to ToIP V2 White Paper
Meeting Schedule
- Every Tuesday (UTC Wednesday) during August 2021 —05:00 to 06:00pm PST / 08:00 to 09:00pm EST / 12:00 to 01:00 UTC (Wednesday)
- See the entry on the ToIP Calendar for a calendar invite you can copy to your own calendar.
Zoom Meeting Location & Recording
https://zoom.us/j/98069743654?pwd=SVpLdTdrQ2lYamhhellNWldzbFNHZz09
Link to the recording
Link to the Zoom chat
Facilitators
Attendees
- sankarshan
- Carly Huitema
- Victor Golubkov
- Drummond Reed
- Scott Perry
- Jacques Bikoundou
- P Subrahmanyam
- Wenjing Chu
- Dave McKay
Key Documents
- Introduction to ToIP V2.0.2 (current version from August 18 2021) <== This is the formal Draft Deliverable (in a Google doc) to which contributions or suggestions can be made directly
Agenda
Time | Agenda Item | Lead | Notes |
5 min |
| Facilitators |
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| 5 min | Review of ToIP unique value proposition survey | Victor Golubkov | |
| 35 min | Follow up on comments in Introduction, ToIP in a Nutshell, Problem Statements and ToIP Model | Drummond Reed | |
| 5 min | Discussion of other sections | Facilitators | |
| 5 min | August Week Three Writing Assignments | All |
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| 5 min |
| Facilitators |
Notes
- Follow up on this idea: The WP should function as a a "call to understanding" to educate audiences about the ToIP stack and the ToIP Foundation. By contrast, the ToIP website should function more as 'a call to action' and address why audiences should get involved in the work of the ToIP Foundation.
- Drummond Reed proposes to use footnotes to highlight ToIP understanding of terms.
Introduction
- Review of comments by Eric Drury , Bart Suichies , Wenjing Chu and sankarshan
Problem statement and ToIP Model
- Mapping sections of the V2 to sections of the V1.
- Wenjing Chu text to be added to the section "Why Has Trust..."
ToIP in a Nutshell
- Drummond Reed introduced new version of the ToIP in a Nutshell section.
- Carly Huitema shared her addition using the idea of 'webs of trust'. Scott Perry added comments regarding 'webs of trust'.
ToIP Unique Value Proposition
- Victor Golubkov presented a diagram to highlight popular answers.
- Jacques Bikoundou suggested to add 'global forum' to the description of the ToIP Foundation.
Decisions
- Retooling ToIP WP V2 to position problem statement earlier in the document than it was in the original WP.
- Add the definition of the term 'trust' to the section "Why Has Trust..."
Action Items
- Victor Golubkov to post a request for comments on the #general Slack channel on "What is the ToIP Foundation’s unique value proposition?"
- Judith Fleenor and Victor Golubkov will coordinate text inside ToIP Working Groups section with WG chairs.
- Victor Golubkov look into adding content from V1 into V2 according to meeting discussion.
- Dave McKay will contribute text in the The Limitations of Account-Based Digital Trust Infrastructure section.
- Scott Perry will contribute text in the Real-World Trust Infrastructure section (possible renamed) but not until after Aug 15.
- Drummond Reed will contribute text in the Introduction and ToIP in a Nutshell sections.